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I guess the link to the Discord server doesn't work anymore. :(

I'll for sure migrate into a DAW whenever I have the weekend to do that. :)
Also, the dynamics was a challenge, due to the proposition I chose, but I understand your feedback - maybe it went too far into that. Somebody said something about the song "having time to breathe", and I fully agree.

Thanks a lot for all the feedback. It really means a lot!

(And congratulations on your song, I just heard it now, but it is amazing - loved it!)

I'm so very confused by DAWs, it will take some weekends for me to be able to accomplish this, hahaha. But I really do appreciate all the feedback. I'll create a more polished version, and I'll for sure let you know.

Thanks for your input. I'll certainly look into Cakewalk. I looked into DAWs, but usually the tutorials that I found were about the paid, professional versions, which I don't think make sense to invest money in the beginning.

And I see what you mean on the "chaos". This was somehow the intention, but I guess it went far over of what I was looking into (I composed it in a piano as a harmony for the first melody, then transcripted and changed to several instruments, just joining some notes/adding some inessential notes just for bridging). Maybe keeping it simpler would have gone way better, looking in retrospective.

Again, thanks a lot for your constructive feedback. I'll look forward to change this melody in the future, making it simpler (and giving it time to rest, as the first feedback mentioned as well). All the best! :)

This is some great advice. I'm new to composing, and I'm kinda learning by myself (did a few courses, read a bunch of books, but I don't work in a team nor anything). I'll certainly keep this ideas in mind (I'm listening to your submission right now, and I already understand what you said about "resting").

Thanks a lot for taking the time to listen and write all this constructive feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it, but the most important part for me was that feedback. All the best! :)